Precious things and darling friends
are usually given at sudden steep bends
good things come at the oddest time
that's when my words forget to rhyme
Gargi
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No matter that they forget to rhyme, that's when they are most sublime And Without the hidden,sudden steep bends, life would be just a chain of dead-ends.
7 comments:
No matter that they forget to rhyme,
that's when they are most sublime
And Without the hidden,sudden steep bends,
life would be just a chain of dead-ends.
Don't be sad!
needn't rhyme always.
everything does magically when you are around. you should be in it.
very deeply written gargi. nice.
Very nice! :)
just WOW......!! Who made you this way?? and how do you form these small deep poems? I cant go away from this blog!!!....
@Sadu - My god, how beautiful are those lines :) No, I am not sad at all :) You come home soon!
@Varsha - Thanks :)
@Anonymous 1 and 2 - Thanks for being so kind :)
and its always tough to put those good moments in words...
though its short, it talks a lot ! and the words do rhyme well... simply superb !
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